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[10 Jul 2005|04:01pm] |
Number four. I'm on a roll! Same goes, babe, but there really is no rush. I know I'm loading these off on you pretty quick, so you don't have to have at it straight away =p
Oh, and can you tell me if I got the Welsh translation of the title right? It's supposed to mean Taken but I know Welsh is a pretty complex language. I figured you'd be the best person to ask ;)
( Cymeredig. )
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[09 Jul 2005|04:32pm] |
Number three for you, Di. A bit of Reed ;) There's no rush to beta this, but can you basically review it like you did the last?
Gracias babe!
( Untitled. )
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[02 Jul 2005|08:34pm] |
Here ya go, Di. I wrote Sam first because I know you like him, so hopefully it'll making beta-ing a little more interesting =p
If you could also do me a favour -- as well as pointing out spelling/grammar errors, could you point out any poor characterisations, plot holes, etc.? And I'd really like to know what you think of the plot. If you could also give me your first impression of Sam, and then your second impression, too.
And is the story too short? Is there too much missing for it to make sense? Did it end okay?
By the way, this takes place a few months after Tigress Trapped. The first scene will be familiar, but I've edited that, too =D
You're a star ;)
( Bound. If you can think of a better title, pleeeeeeassse tell me. My mind's gone blank. )
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